Making Romance Not Work Beautifully

Making Romance Not Work Beautifully

Writing a romance novel is out of my sphere of interest, so I wouldn’t dare to advise anyone on how to write in the romance genre. However, I love romantic aspects in my work. (To all the romance writers out there–I admire your skill.) Through trial and error and occasional criticism, I’ve gathered a few tips about adding fictional romance to a work of another genre.

  • First, my title isn’t a typo. If romance works, it’s not good for fiction (unless it’s the end). I’ve only found two exceptions, which I’ll get to later.
  • Overlooking major character flaws is permissible in a new romance. In fact, it is expected. The red flags make the reader feel wise and promote suspense. If the characters have been together for years, there has to at least be suspicion. (Once your main character has lost the respect of the reader, it is difficult to keep pages turning.)
  • The temptation to give your main character unconditional love from their partner is tempting, but it cannot be perfect. Needs can only be partially met (unless it’s the end).
  • The old tropes still work. Unrequited love is a universal experience. “Beauty and the beast” stories still work. Becoming attracted to a friend. Enemies becoming lovers. Being dumped when things seemed to be going well. Infidelity (whatever that means to your characters) and the rationalizations that accompany it. May-December attractions. The inability to move on after a breakup or death. The danger of those is letting them take over the story, but they add depth to characters, even as background problems.
  • Unless you’re writing erotica, detailed sex scenes aren’t usually necessary. However, sex scenes are useful for character development, as in that state of vulnerability, thoughts and dialogue can reveal a lot of truth in a very believable atmosphere.
  • The longer a romantic relationship has been in existence, the shorter and more loaded the dialogue will be.
  • In real life, romance is a mix of highs and lows. The same for fiction, but the lows are more interesting to read.
  • While a lot of the romantic tropes are still popular, stereotypes from the past are no longer acceptable. Traditional romantic roles have become rather boring to the modern reader (unless the boredom is part of the problem). Read some science fiction romance and LGBTQIA+ fiction.
  • If you must have a perfectly happy couple in your work, it seems to work if the couple is in a mentoring role instead of main characters. The stability of the relationship makes whatever advice they are doling out to your troubled charater more legitimate.
  • The only other way I’ve found to make a perfectly happy couple acceptable is if the relationship itself is so bizarre or controversial to the world that they must fight to survive. My childhood sweethearts who have centuries of memories from past lives as soulmates give everyone around them the creeps. They are still struggling, but against the world instead of each other.

In parting, I wish the worst of luck to your fictional lovers. At least until the end.

4 Comments

    • Caitlin Bechtel

      Thanks so much for the advice on where to start! I read an article in the New Yorker about a woman a lot like I am- she apparently had a lengthy email (& FB & TEXTS- some of my texts have been so long they are cut & people need to click the …; they get CHOPPED!) problem and her friends all said to her sheesh! JUST HAVE A BLOG! You have SO MUCH TO SAY!
      Someone just bit my head off the other day for sending him a whopper of a message (I know a lot of artists- I went to school
      for THAT for some reason & I’m not illiterate like the artists I know rn are!) & said “well I only had time to SKIM that!” Excuuuse me! At least I bother with punctuation now! A writer who I admire very much is Michelle Tea, and her first novel is a giant run-on sentence! Which was fine with me since my brain can take that in- & stream of consciousness is all that comes out of me! So of course I also hear about it, how I have no boundaries! I have moved too much and am always having to get to know more new people- who has time for THAT? I want it to be as if they’ve known me all their lives and Vice versa bc at this age I feel as though who has TIME for all that preliminary shyness & building up to things. I act as if they already know and fill in the blanks as they come up since I’ve had a complicated life. I’m 51 by the way. Small talk is boring and I can’t handle it. My bf just broke up w me and I am sick of getting to know people
      like THAT- I think I have had enough of it! It’s why I took it so hard, I was thinking oh noooo! Now I have to get out of his house and meet MORE PEOPLE!
      I think it’s time to start making stuff up.
      Do you use an editor? I’m friends w some of the indie published writers online and the feedback I’ve gotten from them is, “This is great- and relatable and… well. You need an editor!” My writing gets TANGENTIAL, if you hadn’t noticed… I can edit OTHER people’s writing (mainly spelling and punctuation and awkward sentence structure. Redundancy. I recognize all that!) but my own, I just start ready it & within 10 minutes I’m hitting delete. My own thoughts! Impossible to ORGANIZE!

  1. Caitlin Bechtel

    “Unless it’s the end”…. Yeah! But in most of my stories, it’s ALWAYS the end & the messed up person who can’t let go or get over it is ME! But I’m not a published writer, and I go on tangents and segue onto something else that laying on my face in a puddle of my own snot and tears just reminded me of, until I’m laughing. Then I remember. This can go on for years. People are sick of hearing me talk so I talk to myself. I need a blog- how did you make this one? I signed onto Substack but I reeeeally don’t understand it!! I know I could just Google it (probably!). I wonder if I’ve read anything of yours-
    I read it ALL but sometimes I don’t come across it! Thank you if you read this ramble! Humbly, CaitySchmaity

    • I took a course “WordPress for Beginners” at Udemy.com and followed the instructions to set up my site. The course wasn’t expensive, but parts of setting up a website can get pricey. There are some you can use for free if you are okay with ads running on your site. If you’re not sure you want a website, I would try using one of the free ones first, like wix.com or wordpress.com. As far as writing goes, if you feel the urge to write, you should probably be writing. That’s my belief, anyway. Try some short stories and search at duotrope.com for publishers that buy your genre and submit. The worst that can happen is they’ll say no. If you keep trying, eventually you’ll get a yes. Best of luck to you and let me know when you get your blog set up.

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